By Horoscopezine
OSE
Levels 1-4
Premise: There is a dungeon by a big skull, go explore it.
What do we get here?
This is a one page dungeon that comes with pretty much no text, all art.
Usability/formatting
What is on the page is easy to understand, you get an assortment of monsters and a couple of traps as well as the map of the dungeon.
As a one page dungeon I think the real problem here is all the space taken up by unnecessary pregens that could have been used to add some flavour here. There are no magic items for a start. Any room descriptions are supposed to be inferred from the image given and there does not appear to be anything to interact with really.
If you want to build a usable adventure out of this one page you are going to have to do most of the work yourself.
Portability
Lack of details always makes an adventure portable however it is much easier to change details to fit your own world than to have to invent them wholesale as you would have to to make this an engaging adventure.
Recommendation
Nice art, just too bare bones to run. There is no story or personality here.
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