By Tim Shorts
Self published
No system/level given
Premise: Crows sit atop a barrow in the woods, go investigate.
What do we get here?
Over 2 pages we get a simple barrow to explore.
Usability/formatting
For simple content this is pretty good. I would really like to see the contents of the barrow tied together better thematically however if you can over look that it runs fine.
I like the treasure, the magical bracers are whatever but the magical torch is pretty nice.
The random monster encounter table only has four entries, which is fine, I am not sure they fit so well for such a small and enclosed location.
There is the odd grammar mistake in the writing which is not the end of the world.
Portability
You could drop this into any woodland hex you have that needs spicing up.
Recommendation
I like the idea, the execution just needs a couple more drafts to really amp this thing up. As is you can pull out and drop in easily enough I just don't love it despite the potential it has.
Available on the author's patreon.
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